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Purgatory Page 4 by UnassumingPumpkin Purgatory Page 4 by UnassumingPumpkin
Page 4 of my entry for the Observer Graphic Short Story Competition
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real-faker Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Student Filmographer
AHAAAA. Just read through these. Brilliant! Your stuff is always such a joy to look at, but on top of that you're really great at telling stories. : D Love it!
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layclay Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011  Professional General Artist
brilliant
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ArtticWitchica Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2011
It would be interesting to see more of this story. I'm really curious about all the different figures in the bar and why they are there.
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Scream-Deafening Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2011
*giggles* "You've got something against Apple computers?"
I so have something against them, or rather the way people treat them as the best thing ever. x)
However, great work, I love the amount of details and the consistency with the style and such. Great colour scheme also.
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Captain-Black-Rose Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Clever through and through - concept and dialogue both. Well executed as always, madam.
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honest-liar-13 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011  Hobbyist
Is that Haliday on the left there?

Anyway, I've really enjoyed this comic! Is there going to be more?
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UnassumingPumpkin Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011
Sort of yes. As for more of this comic, I don't know. It was only meant to be a 4 page story, but if I ever think of something where I need 2 people to argue over something in particular, I might revisit these guys. As a story it's not really plot-based.
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honest-liar-13 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2011  Hobbyist
You definately should. From what I've seen of these two characters, they seem to be really interesting. I'd like to know more of their story!
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Carsis Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011  Professional Interface Designer
So far I like your entry and I hope you win simply to see more down the road! :D
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notsally Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2011
This is totally awesome.
Plus, your style rocks beyond measure.
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Onsheka Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
On the bright side he can take that tube outta his nose.
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UnassumingPumpkin Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011
This is true. i think he's too used to it now though.
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elmenora Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2011  Student General Artist
Very interesting. Can't wait to see more!
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root-vegetable Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011
that's not helly, is it?
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UnassumingPumpkin Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2011
Sort of. I like having other characters have little semi-cameos every now and again.
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root-vegetable Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2011
Oooh, awesome! It's like unofficial, unexpected Where's Waldo :P
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lizoftheinfinite Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011  Student General Artist
Wow, this artwork is great! I like this story and I really hope you win. :)
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creepella Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011
Haha I loved the humor in this because while it's sad to think about the whole idea that they're all dead the dialogue between the kid and the man was just great
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preachingtothechoir Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011
That was great! Your tiny dead kid was so adorable. He put me in mind of a small animal. :D
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Arlexim Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011  Student General Artist
Really good so far. I see it's very current in the news ;)
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UnassumingPumpkin Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2011
Oddly enough, I didn't actually know anything about apple being in the news when I put it in. It was weird fluke.
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MadameRuby Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011  Professional Writer
Is that Helly I see snuck in there?
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UnassumingPumpkin Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2011
Kinda, yeah.
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Darktwinkle Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011
Nice little story, kinda bleak but hey thats how life is sometimes, not everything is fun and laughter. You certainly know how to tell/pace a story

It's nice seeing the finished product, after seeing a wip :) oh and Barman reminds me of a guy from spn ^^
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UnassumingPumpkin Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011
Yeah, I dunno where this bleakness came from :S But thank yee dear <3 And yus, that is indeed a reference to Gabriel from SPN.
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TheBadPunQueen Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
These pages are sooo great o far <3
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taziekins Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011
nice to see your signature wit hasn't dulled :-)
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BecSparrow Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011
Recognised the BBC layout straight away in the news panels! Good eye for detail there!
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PhysiscoRobot Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011
i like this story so far, i hope you win that competition!
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